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ASF Poetry Thread

I found a great quote on the internet, which I include as a jpeg - that you place your hand in the ocean and you are linked around the world to all oceans.

So I figured that Shakepeare should have included that in Romeo and Juliet for instance - maybe Juliet goes hiome to Naples, and Romeo stays in Sydney.

The following is an exchange of emails - btw Juliet is marginally more romantic that Romeo.

email sent 1.00 am from Juliet to Romeo

If you think that's romantic - wait till you hear Romeo - sheesh.
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HOW SPECIAL WAS JESUS (Are you more than just abject conjecture)

that he lived for a fact is for certain
that he died is for certain a fact
had more gags than a young Richard Burton
and his gigs on the mountain were packed
and as usual Israel was hurtin’
and as usual Caesar lacked tact
but two questions!? at first and last curtain
was he bankrolled and big daddy backed.?

we know he could handle his chisels
we know he could make dovetail joints
could he rustle up loaves when he whistled?
did those tales of the dove make his point?
hey Jesus this bar-bq sizzles!
and there’s water-to-wine to anoint
we are left sitting cross eyed and quizzled
did big daddy this son-god appoint?

how special was Jesus ( its scary)
no daddy on earth - wow, how rare
we know he was reared by young Mary
cripes - birth without sex - how unfair!
I’m sorry I’m just a bit wary
cos bonks unremembered abound
his DNA could be quite lairy
but DNA tests weren’t around

oh God it’s a heavyweight lecture
you ask us in good faith to swallow
that you’re more than just abject conjecture
and we all should drop nets and just follow?
since I can’t detain or detect you
I need to see facts that aren’t hollow
until then my soul has “rainchecked” you
as unlikely as sungod Apollo.

if you wander through biblical text
there are lessons within and without
what applies in this world or the next
and what’s with or without any doubt
how today to treat man on the street
or to pray for ourselves after death
how to hear while our heart has a beat
how to fear with our own final breath

He taught to forget and forgive
and not be the first to cast stones
I reckon it’s true as I live
that Jesus and Gandhi were clones
- if reincarnated reliving
he flew down to earth on his throne
he’d say that the rest was misgiving
and he’d settle a heap of unknowns

a child that with water is branded
must follow MEN’s ideas of “church”
next country new laws are demanded
this child there is left in the lurch
hence rather than see a child stranded
and wing-clipped on some man-made perch
I’d encourage that young soul just landed
to fly all the skies of the earth

- and find mother nature, such beauty awaits ys
and don’t take the bait if some mad bishop baits ya
include ALL the skies in your search

and oaks more or less that so rigidly guess
are kinda inclined to look strange you’ll confess
.. just watch robin’s making their beautiful nest
in the flexing branch of the birch.

and oaks you'll confess that so rigidly guess
are leading the world to some mad A-bomb mess
who will shoot at another they think of as less
..... just flex with the beautful birch

…………..
to make your soul bigger, let go of that trigger
and find in your Bible a concept that’s mega !!....

try washing the feet of some poor homeless beggar !!!
....choose biblical gems to research
(and beggar the self-centred rest.)
 
(and beggar the self-centred rest.)
and go with the tide that is ...........................................................right! justified!
you’re left............................... with an attitude ........... broad as it’s ............. wide
........................................and beggar the self centred rest.....................................
 
Time is not a line, but a series of now points.
- Taisen Deshimaru

THE NOW POINTS OF TIME

I like to ask questions like “why”
of a turtle or towering pine
like a telescope trained in the sky
looking out for some heavenly sign
if “time”’s just some “now points” – wide spaced - and
it never is, was, will be “line”
I would like hourglass grains interlaced
with a million milestones of mine.

I like to ask questions like "how"
pausing (microsope mode) at a leaf
and I savour the “gee” and the “wow”
or humour some futile belief
I frequently listen and touch
and with all these new “now points” enlisted
I hope they’re much closer as such
than they’d be if I simply "existed".

Shall I pause at some bush cathedral
lined with gums by some architect rare?
of some pyramid rock penta-hedral
for Egyptian monks to compare?
do I savour each moment each second
so the ‘now points’ can merge much increased?
so my time line on earth when it’s reckoned
will emerge as some dashes at least?

remember each second, of life force that's beckoned
fullfilling my last if not least milestone reckoned
on my highway - due west to high priest.
 

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Too much intellect in this thread for me! How about some novel completions of this old limerick favourite?

There once was a man from Nantuckit,
.....
 
There once was a man from Nantuckit,
Who bought KFC by the bucket,
His stomach grew big,
Like a lazy, fat pig,
But he didnt care, he said f**k it!

Dont blame me, blame :alcohol:
 
there once was man from Nantucket
who believed if the "law of the bucket"
if the **** hits the fan
the very best plan
is to hide under buckets - or duck it

yep - lol - theres a few words rhyme with 'tuck' m8
 
there once was a man from Nantucket
who kept a pet hen in a bucket
and locked it at home
- cos the damned thing would roam
and the rooster next door used to peck it
 
This is called blatant plagiarism - best if you sing along with Sting here.

starts off somewhat romantic, ends up a bit pessimistic , Global Warming etc ( sorry ) - in any case, the sun's gonna burn out one day

To those of you (other) hopeless idiots who might have likened the annual orbit or earth around sun - together with the moon spinning the earth 13 times in the process , and always facing the earth - to a waltz on a gigantic dancefloor, (incidentally 1000 light seconds across , radius 8 light minutes if you prefer - light from the sun is 8 minutes old , a sunrise actually "happened" 8 minutes before you see it, etc) ....

here are the original Sting lyrics, and also the "alternative lyrics".
capitals indicate emphasis - seriously amateur as usual - but maybe you'll enjoy the music at least ..

gotta feeling this is a fast waltz
great song posted by chainsw back there
Sting - Until
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=93780&highlight=sting#post93780
 
MORE LIKELY FIND PEACE THAN WAR

there's no problem people enquiring,
into what is behind God's door,
there's no problem people aspiring,
to nobler deeds than before,
there's no problem people admiring,
the WHOLE world - and tolerate more,
more likely find troubles less tiring,
more likely find friend and not flaw.
.........
more likely find peace and not war.
 
The Voyeur
Reading a poem from the book Stanyan Street and Other Sorrows by Rob McKuen
This kid found this book in a thrift store - "Boy Meets Book"
shows you how a poem can get to someone I guess
 
The speakers on my computer are not working,
tried the headphones, the sponge found crumbling
and nay sound cometh from them either and curse
have found no way to get them going, all very sad.

Have tried all advice, BIOS and everything suggested
and no sound cometh from them at all, oh what to do
and then another suggestion and every effort be made
and again no sound, cannot hear 2020's posts, despair.

"My blasted speakers won't work", by noirua
 
noi - you talk about despair !? - lol . I try to enrol in city2surf last Tuesday - only to be told that they are limiting this year ( forst time) to 64,000 - and enrolments closed the day before. rats.

Speaking of despair, and further to that song "Anthem" - the longing for homeland by an emigrant - here's a poem I found on the wall of a certain restaurant in Adelaide (I'm sure many will recognise it
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=188944&highlight=korberg#post188944
when you get your headphones going - check out Tommy Korberg m8 - the song, the words, the presentation are just fantastic!.
Here's another version:- (good, and puts it in contaxt - but Tommy is GREAT! )
Josh Groban-Anthem
 

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Back to the "Voyeur" post for a sec , extract from "Book Meets Girl" poem (posted way back) - he picked up that book in thrift store.

 
Further to Emigrant's longing .... http://whitewolf.newcastle.edu.au/w...amLindsay/verse/Miscellaneous/tomysister.html

Incidentally, I have a letter written by my great-great-grandfather to my great-grandfather... wishing him well as he sets off to Australia mid 1800's
In it he says (paraphrased)

The following verse follows from the fact that he (back to Adam Lindsay GOrdon ) proposed to a girl as he was almost about to board the boat - adding that he would rip up his ticket - she turned away , albeit with tears in her eyes)

 
Speaking of which .. how's this for a beautiful poem, for a man in reflective mood .. (btw he ended up in Sth Aus initially at least ) - he seemed to spend a lot of time looking at the sea - hence maybe the "life is mostly froth and bubble " quote
http://whitewolf.newcastle.edu.au/w.../verse/SeaSpraySmokeDrift/quarefatigasti.html


more on that girl he left behind ...
 
and how's this for a load of bs ahh - who cares , no-one's gonna read it anyways

Road to Mandalay brought up to date with the space age.....
Leonard Warren sings "On The Road To Mandalay"

 
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